Shadow Form / Coruscade wording

Current Wording

Effects: The target of this spell is enveloped in a confusing pattern of shadows (for Dark and Shadow) or coruscating pattern of motes of light (Solar and Star). Any attempt to physically hit the target with Melee or Ranged attacks will have 2 (+ 2 / Rank) subtracted from the Strike Chance. In Close combat 1 (+ 1 / Rank) is subtracted. Any attack made without using the sense of sight (either normal, or for that particular attack) will not be affected by this spell (e.g. a blind entity, a trample attack). In almost all circumstances it is quite apparent when an entity is under the effect of this spell. No form of magical vision will aid in avoiding the Strike Chance reduction produced as a result of this spell.

Proposed Wording

Effects: The target of this spell is enveloped in a confusing pattern of either shadows (for Dark and Shadow) or coruscating light (for Solar and Star), which increases their defence versus physical Melee or Ranged attacks by 2 (+ 2 / Rank). In Close combat only 1 (+ 1 / Rank) is gained. No form of magical vision will aid in avoiding the defence bonus produced as a result of this spell, but any attack made without using the sense of sight (e.g. by a blind entity, a trample attack) will not be affected. It is usually quite apparent when an entity is under the effect of this spell.